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When life gives you CreepyPasta. Chapter V

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You screamed and clung to Jack as you fell down the hole that seemed to never end. Not that you could hear him over your screams, but he was choking and coughing from the lack of oxygen he was getting because of your death grip.

He knew he promised to get you down as safely as he could, but he didn't know he'd die from not breathing along the way. He wouldn't get your kidneys this way if you did die. But he continued to let you hold onto none the less.

Though he was surprised you were still screaming and clinging to him even after he landed on his feet, completely un-harmed. Did you not notice you had stopped falling? Or did you just enjoy hugging him? "(Y-y/n), you can l-let g-go now.."

You stopped screaming and slowly opened your eyes, meeting Jacks hood. You hesitantly looked over his head and saw that you were in a.. Parking lot? What the fuck? You thought as you climbed off Jacks back and looked around at the Dimly lighted lot. You couldn't help the fact a thought about wondering, if this is where they were gonna kill you ran through your head. And also about how Horror film cliche' it seemed to you.

"Hey! Come on already! Get in the damn car!"

You both looked over towards Jeff who was leaning out a SUV, gesturing you two to get in. BEN crawled up out of the sun roof and pointed at the both of you, then wiggled his fingers in a 'Come here' gesture. You both gave each other one last look before walking off towards the SUV. You got in the middle seat. It went like this.

Slendy and Jane in the front seat.

BEN, You and Jeff. With you in between them.

Smiley and Jack in the back.

Not that you were completely comfortable with sitting right beside Jeff within an easy reach, but he seemed cooled off enough. Though he did give you a few stink eyes that you tried to ignore. You were seriously thinking through just sitting on BENs lap, but you had a feeling he would like that just a little bit to much.

So now, here you all were, in the SUV heading to the Slender-mansion. You had been driving for about three hours and it was quiet. Too quiet for you, seeing you hated quiet care rides. There's not even any music! You're eye twitched as you continued to stare straight ahead.

BEN sat staring at you from the corner of his eye. He could feel how tense you were and he wasn't even touching you. If she really hasn't figured out we're NOT gonna kill her by now, maybe she really is stupid.. He thought to himself, still looking at you. He shifted a bit, rubbing against your arm.

You glanced over at him and noticed him staring hard at you, which only caused you more discomfort. You wanted to scream, the air was so awkward and quiet. It but the shit out of you, and with him staring at you like that did NOT help.

You glanced back at him to see him still staring. This was not gonna work.

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"I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!"

Everyone jumped and Slenderman swerved the SUV over to the side of the road. You flailed your arms, almost hitting Jeff and and BEN in the process.

BEN and Jeff slammed into the side, trying to escape your limbs. BEN's eyes widened and he ducked his head down as your hand almost hit him. "Hey maan, calm down!"

You turned towards him with wide eyes. He wanted you to calm down? How could you remain calm!? You were in a SUV with Killers. It was crammed for you, it was quiet, you were stressed and tired. "Calm down.. Calm down!? You want me to calm down!? I'm in a car full of Killers! Plus, it's way to quiet for my liking and I'm sitting right beside a guy who tried to kill me a little over a few hours ago!" By now you had everyone in SUVs attention; even Slendermans, seeing he had pulled over. "You're staring at me like a pedophile! I'm tired! Stressed! I got taken from my home! I need a shower! Sure, I'll calm down! WHEN KIDNEYS STOP BEING JACKS FAVORITE THING!"

Everyone was silent staring at you in shock. You turned towards the front window again, your chest heaving and your eye twitching. Jane brought her head backwards as she continued to stare with everyone else. She was also amazed, you seemed so quiet and nice; except to Jeff that one time. She couldn't believe you had burst like that. "Umm.. (Y/n), do you-"

"Yes, I wanna sit up front."

She nodded and you quickly climbed over BEN to get out the door, making sure to apply extra pressure on his leg when you 'accidentally' stepped on it, causing Jeff to snicker and receive a vary hard punch to the leg from BEN. Jane had climbed in the back, forcing BEN in the middle for she had Zero to none desire to sit next to Jeff. You climbed in the front, buckled up and after a few minutes of everyone sitting there, Slendy took off again.

Sure it was quiet for the rest of the ride, but you were completely fine now that you had spilled everything out.

Finally about another hour or two, you had arrived at Slender-mansion. Saying it was big, wasn't anywhere close. Your jaw dropped as you stepped out of the SUV, you swore you could hear a chuckle from Slendy but that was probably just your imagination acting up again. This is where they live!? You had to admit. It was beautiful, like one of those places you see from back in the old times. Complete with Fountain and everything. It makes you wonder just how many other people lived here.

You shut the door and stood staring as everyone else got out and started talking. You felt Smiley come up beside you and rub against your leg, you absentmindedly started petting his head. You stared for a few minutes longer until you were snapped out of your trance by Jane asking if you were coming.

You caught up with them, only to stop a little more then half-way towards the mansion. "Wait!"

They turned to look at you, with their eyebrows raised. Wondering what was wrong now.

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"I don't have any of my things, I never got the chance to get them before we left."

They all dead-panned, wondering to themselves. How did none of us think of that!?
LOL, I DON'T KNOW WHAT THAT FREAK-OUT WAS FOR. I just wanted to make you seem mental, like you would fit in with them a bit. We all wanna fit in. Some more than others. *Cough* Me. *Cough*.

:iconloolfaceplz:Mhm, they're all amazing killers who plan everything and don;t get caught because they're so organized and un-forgetful.. But they forget the fact you need your clothes and shit. Lul.. I love it. It just proves even the most careful people screw up.

Say hello Fifth chapter. Yeah, well, he says hello. And I'm back, My no life ass is back with this chapter, what is this? The second day in the row? Third? You people must be pretty important if I'm doing it like this.

More than you know, pishaw.

I'll just go blind sitting in front of my computer all day since I can't find anything else to do.:iconwhynotplz:

This chapter was so rushed also. I guess my rushed chapter turn out good though, according to you people..
:iconcomputerguyplz::iconcomputerguy2plz:

I don't own CreepyPasta. Once again, obviously.
I don't own you. Yet..
NOW ENJOY A FLASHY MUSTACH.:iconmegustacheplz:

Chapter I: [link]
Chapter II: [link]
Chapter III: [link]
Chapter IV: [link]
Chapter V: Dumb-ass, you're already here.
Chapter VI: [link]
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I'M OBSESSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ALSO, I'M LITERALLY LISTENING TO PRETTY LITTLE PHYSCO RIGHT NOW LOL